Oh, dear. Three weeks in, 2 Broke Girls is not quite living up to its potential as the new season’s break-out/talent-filled/girl-power-trend sitcom. I’m not talking about ratings — those are solid, for sure. I mean the actual quality of the jokes and the direction (or lack of one) the series is taking as it settles in as a weekly series.
Now that we’re beyond the meet-cute, Laverne & Shirley with sex jokes set up that brought Kat Dennings’ Max and Beth Behrs’ Caroline together in a somehow cramped yet roomy Brooklyn apartment, 2 Broke Girls needed to do two things: move that relationship along and develop some of the supporting cast. But three weeks in, about all we’ve got is Max bonding well with Caroline’s horse, Chestnut.
Sure, we still have Dennings’ fine line-readings. This week, I enjoyed her drop-dead deadpan delivery of, “I did not light up. There is no light in me.” And Behrs is, through the sheer will-power she seems to bring to bear on the inflection she gives her rich-girl prattle, managing to make her one-dimensional character more vivid. Her Caroline is now a pleasant combination of spoiled, self-conscious about being spoiled, and a good sport at playing straight-woman to set up Max’s drolleries.
But 2 Broke Girls does that mediocre-sitcom thing of having its actors deliver lines as though they were jokes but which, upon cursory inspection, prove not to be. “I’m eight dollars,” said Caroline, looking at a pair of $800 shoes she used to own, now marked down at the Goodwill center where Max brought her to shop. “I’ve been reduced.” The studio audience laughed… at what? Yes, there was a little poignancy in the line, but not mirth. Yes, there was a pun there, but not enough of one to elicit those suspiciously hearty guffaws.
Some further danger signs for the series:
• A limp variation on the old hide-the-salami. The diner cook Oleg used the too-often punned meat as a punchline this week.
• The repeated use of the word “bitch” as though it is inherently funny. Just calling someone a “bitch,” without any real joke construction surrounding it, fails to work as humor.
• The portrayal of Max and Caroline’s Asian boss. Han Lee’s flustered response to seeing up Caroline’s skirt last week — “So sorry but many thanks” — was only two consonants away from Joe Jitsu’s “So solly” stereotype in the old Dick Tracy cartoon series.
2 Broke Girls was the Whitney Cummings sitcom that was supposed to be the diamond compared to the rough that is NBC’s Whitney. What is holding Broke Girls back? Is it the hovering presence of co-producer Michael Patrick King, who wrote the second episode and doesn’t seem to have adjusted the vulgarity level to the right setting? (Sample line last week, after Caroline asked Max to open the apartment’s back door: “We’ve only known each other for two days and already you’re asking for back door?” Is that a left-over from, say, fifth-season Sex and the City Samantha?)
The hand of Cummings could still be descried this week when a bartender served the two broke girls drinks, then went over to a couple of male patrons and high-fived them, yelling, “Vagina!” Cummings is, after all, the woman who recently told The New York Times, “Vagina jokes paid for my house.”
Yes, but when she used them her stand-up act, they used to be funny ones.
I’ll keep rooting for you, though, 2 Broke Girls! You had such promise. Let’s shape up and give this half-hour a bit more snap, shall we?
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Gave up on Two Broke Girls after the second episode. Cat Dennings deserves so much more than this extremely unfunny sitcom.
Ken I don;t know what you are watching but Cat Dennings is really bad. I wanted to like her but she is in the wrong place. There are no “fine line readings”. Who is paying you to say that? I keep watching because Beth is hilarious.
Eh, to each his own. I think Kat Dennings is hilarious on this show. Laughed a few times last night. It’s only the third episode, so of course it hasn’t hit a solid groove yet. Go re-watch the third episode of “Friends”.
@KLH: I think she is terrible as well. Very poor line reading – sometimes too flat, sometimes too animated. It’s odd. I also thought the horse scene was way too long and then was confused when it went to commercial after that.
Totally agree about Kat not being funny – just not right for this role. Beth is hilarious – the only reason I somewhat pay attention. It probably won’t be enough to keep me watching though.
I agree – I was prepared to hate Beth and her character, but I think she’s far superior to Kat in this show.
I love how these columns bring out the “theater critics” in the great unwashed. “Poor line readings.” Don’t like it? Don’t watch it. I like it, I’m watching it, I think both leads are funny.
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I agree! After reading all of Ken Tucker’s previews singing the praises of Kat Dennings, I was surprised to find out she’s the one who has allowed her sitcom character become a one note caricature. On the other hand, Beth Behrs has managed to take a part seemingly envisioned as a caricature and turn it into a character I almost care about. Overall, this series is going to have to improve significantly (jettisoning all the supporting cast from the diner would be a good start) in order to retain a spot on my DVR.
I think the writing is sometimes cute, but the acting is awful…from all parties. Flat readings, poor comic timing. I actually think Whitney Cummings would be better in the role.
And the laugh track is awful.
Painfully bad.
I was surprised how chunky Kat was in that waitress outfit? It is not flattering at all on her!
Your name implys country bumpkin. Why do we always have to talk about a girls weight? Let’s turn the tables and talk about your bald spot.
Chunky? I think she looks SUPER HOT! just cause YOU don’t like a girl with a big chest and nice curvy hips don’t make stupid comments that would put any beautiful woman like that down.
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Yes, this show is BAD. I don’t understand how so many critics liked it. The jokes aren’t funny – it’s like they are trying WAY too hard. Can’t stand the laugh track/studio audience aspect.
This show tries WAY too hard. I feel like the characters even wait a little bit after each line to make the audience feel awkward so they have to laugh.
YES! It’s so awkward. And the humor is just trying so hard to be edgy by being raunchy. I don’t mind raunchy, but just because something’s raunchy doesn’t make it funny. Pretty typical of Whitney Cummings and her humor…..
you can’t have a Loo (English for barotohm) in the Kitchen, it’s bad Feng Shui!(Hey, Bruce Lee supposedly died because he didn’t listen to his Feng Shui consultant so it’s always good to know)OR, do we have a Bridge over Water or Water over the Bridge?Cheers! Ta for the chuckle!
Show us more of your t!ts Kat. That will save the show.
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I wanted to love this show, because Kat Dennings is phenomenal, but I can’t! The script is just too d*mn awful!
I think the show has promise they need to stop trying so hard and throw away that laugh track.
don’t like it? don’t watch it!… duh
This show reminds me of a color-by- numbers Disney channel show but with some vulger words thrown in. I am a horse owner but I don’t find any of the horse humor funny. It is cheesy and inaccurate. The Caroline character might have been funny six years ago with Paris Hilton was relevant but not so much anymore. And I agree that they need a supporting cast. The bartender was the most interesting part of the whole episode.
This is by far the best of the new comedies for the fall.Sure hope they give it a chance. It’s actually funny.
Are you SURE you’re watching 2 Broke Girls? Because that show is NOT funny. It owes its ratings to HIMYM and Two and a Half Men. However, those two shows are also getting lower ratings, You can thank 2 Broke Girls for that.
I think this show is HILLARIOUS!!!! How can you say that they owe their ratings to HIMYM & Two & A Half Men when most people know how to use a remote!?!? If I dont like a show im not going to watch it!!!
regardless of everything u just wrote…this show remains 3000x times better than sad excuse they still call “two & a half men”.
AMEN TO THAT!
2.5 Men is just brutal. I mean Ashton is just playing his character in That 70′s Show. They should just stop, come up with a clever way to bring Charlie back. Make it like Roseanne did, it was her writing a book and that terrible Lottery plot was part of the book. Or do something brilliant, or just cancel the show.
2.5 Men is getting removed from my DVR’s series manager tonight. Torture.
Like the actresses, but this show is beyond bad. Still, not any worse than, say, Two and a Half Men.
I didnt think i’d enjoy it at first but now its become 1 of the few new shows this season im still watching and its still better than the abysmal free agents and the terrible up all night
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I don’t know what new comedies are worse: this one, New Girl or Whitney.
Whitney
Yeah. definitely Whitney.
And Whitney co-created 2 Broke Girls. That explains why it’s not funny.
Whitney, followed closely by The New Girl.
Whitney then 2 Broke Girls. New girl is at least developing side characters and doesn’t have that god aweful laugh piercing the dialogue in every scene. News Flash: it is not 1950 anymore. We know when jokes are funny. You don’t have to tell us. I find it amazing that so many sitcoms have so little faith in their audience, especially when the writing is this blunt. You can see the setups and punchlines a mile away, but just in case you didnt feel yourself get hit in the face with the funny joke bat, we’re going to have dozens of people laughing with you.
Kat Dennings is voluptuous, gorgeous, sexy and beautiful. She’s amazing. That woman is incredible. She’s a very talented actress. It’s an exceptional performance by her, just wonderful.
Agreed. She has the best figure in Hollywood. Bing her and be amazed.
um…”Bing her”???
nnnnnnnno.
I love Kat and so glad she isn’t a stick figure like most actresses(on that note, the blonde is pretty also). She looks like an average woman around my age; thin but not skinny with something on her. My opinion, she shouldnt change a bit and stay healthy
I love Kat Dennings, but this show is already becoming a bit of a chore to sit through. Can they please lose the horny cook already? What on earth do the show’s producers think he actually brings to the table?
Salami, apparently.
zing!
the actor seems decent enough given what he has to work with… but for the character to work long term I think they should have made him more of a ‘chivalrous pervert’ as opposed to blatantly creepy
definitely better than Two & half men: 70′s show edition
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Love Kat but no more pet horse please!
What? Chesnut was the best part of the show…
“lets kill her”
“Chestnut!!!”
“lets kill her and eat her”
Lol
Yes! Best moment in the show was the horse dialogue. …Or is it a monologue when you’re talking to a horse and you deliver both sides of the conversation?
The pilot of this show was terrible enough to get me running for the hills. The whole thing is just incredibly dated. It feels and looks like a sitcom from the late 70′s, and, while I am a fan of that era, it’s at least 35 years out of date. Then again Mike & Molly lasted so there’s no accounting for taste.
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I quite enjoy it. although:
- Lose the horse
- Fire the Oleg the cook
- Bring back the hot douchebag that Max slept with in the first episode
I agree.
Fire the horse.
Lose the Russkie cook.
Sell the restaurant to Charlie Sheen.
Let Charlie finance the cupcake business…not that there are any laughs there either…
I completely disagree, I think this show is great.
2broke Girls is the worst show I’ve seen in decades. The girls themselves would be great – in a different show. Horrible, sexist, offensive scrips.. just abysmal.
I second that! Today they made horrible, offensive jokes about old people. It is one thing to be smart and funny it is completely different when can’t do better than insult the weak and defenseless. I never watch the show. This is the only disgusting moment I ever saw.
I tuned out by the middle of the 2nd episode when the girl fell in horse poo. Too stupid, not funny and the one girl is too obnoxiously sarcastic.
-this is mud, say it’s mud-
-okay, it’s mud-
-there’s carrots in the mud-
that was classic.
Horse Poo? I thought it was “Brooklyn”?
I don’t think the back door joke was that vulgar. It’s way more subtle that just shouting “vagina!” or “bitch!”. If anything they should just dump Cummings as writer perhaps then it might become a better show.